Alien 2.7

So I'm really struggling with this fic. The main problem is I wonder if I'm really the right person to tell it--the genre of it requires a kind of sustained narrative development that I'm just really not good at, and I've been struggling with that all along and that'll be the main issue when I revise. I have to add a lot more exposition to increase the drama and make sure Brian's actions are clearly in character.

But I am too busy having a nervous breakdown to revise right now, so that'll have to wait until next week or something. Right now I'm just going to keep posting because I find it kind of cathartic.

Disturbing! Please remember the warnings.

( Alien 2.7 )

Alien 3.1

Remember the warnings, please.

( Alien 3.1 )

Alien 3.2

Remember the warnings, please.

( Alien 3.2 )